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Personally I think the first image lacks better presentation, since the first image is the one which is shown in models listing, so a well prepared image will catch one's eye easier. I guess for free models this is not an issue, but that's something to keep in mind for premium models.
Also, there's a grammar mistake. It should be "deer", not "dear".
So other than that, good job, and keep up the good work!
thanks for your feedback